Minor spelling mistake at Damage Multiplier, missing an L.
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It should be “nearby” instead of “near by” under the doctor part of the selection screen.
Some more extremely nitpicky feedback: the “some” under the home-made turret skill should be removed for clarity because the blade trap description starts in a similar manner and it just sounds out of place.
The A.L.P.S description should start with “The” because it’s introducing a proper noun/acronym.
After the comma, it should say “this automatic targeting turret” because it’s not a proper noun and the rest of the basic nouns in the class descriptions use “this” to refer to them.
Sincerely,
Somebody who has spent way too much time proofreading papers.
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