i do like the sound of the 2nd music, looks really nice
here is some suggestions
-add an area on it for future events that will happen (maybe at the end of the current community event section, this is probably an idea that would be better for future idle screens)
-gmt had a nice personal part about it where at the start for a short few seconds or so it would talk about the current season and such, like “august is tying up the summer season, many people are starting to go back to school and such, but dont worry since you can still play and have fun with people whenever” or something.
-something mentioning what was added recently into TU like, “A renewal of maps people have always loved, one of the much loved GMT Ball race maps has been breathed new life into it and turned into the new map Woodlands, and the good old altitude has had a new revamp to make it look better than before”
-fading out the music at the end of a song and using something nice and memorable like the TU logo something nice like “Tower unite - play today with friends and meet new friends.” something nice that could change or not with each idle screen to end out with the music
(also maybe making a thread for the community to help out with non copyrighted music that would work well with idle screens, since i know there are people in the TU community who have had ideas for music that would be good for idle screens)