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Here's what I noticed:
That should be "impatience" instead of "inpatience."
"Spent" would be the proper word here, as it is the past tense of "spend."
Just a minor typo, "trough" should be "through."
Punctuation should always be inside quotation marks if next to them, so it should by "game," even if the comma isn't technically a part of the quote.
Here, "those" should be "that." I want to say it's because "money" is technically a single pool of currency and is therefor singular, but don't quote me on that one. If you were to say "all those Units on beer" you would be fine.
Another instance of the little "through" typo.
A small typo. It's spelled "maybe" instead of "maby."
More minor typos. "Untill" should be spelled as "Until."
Thanks for taking a look! Really, your grammar is fine. A few minor typos and little bits of rule breaking here and there aren't something to worry about. It's easy to read and understand what you write, and at the end of the day that's really all I care about.